what do you guys think of this layout?

[Yonamaria]

hello guys, need critiques on these layout

http://mf.hyouri.org/layouts/01/index.html
and
http://mf.hyouri.org/layouts/04/index.html

what do you think?

more on http://mf.hyouri.org

[katie-kate]

I like the pattern in the "Bittersweet" layout, but the character in the background looks strange. Whatever filter you used has smudged it so that it looks messy, and it looks out of place with the rest of the layout, though the other characters look messy as well.

I like the pattern of the other layout as well. The main image is a little grungy for my taste, but I suggest rethinking the navigation as a lot of people hate "mystery" navigation.

[Yonamaria]

hehehehe, okee :D Thanks so much for replying! see ya around! :D

 

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[sarahstrange]

i liked the layout you didnt post the best. its really cool.

[Ammi-K]

For the layout bittersweet I think its a bit too vibrant. The colouring in the header. Though its really cute x]
Umm, I agree that it looks a tad bit messy but i think it looks a bit unique like that o.o but its kind of hard to see and hurts the eyes if you stare for too long.
I like the colours you used for content but I think the red links are a bit hard to read. Maybe darken it a bit?

the second layout..

I actually dont see anything wrong with it. I think its cute.
I love how you arranged the layout.
thought content colours and links look a bit boring compared to the site header.
Maybe use a bit more colours.

Great work =3 I love it!

[alioki]

for the 01 layout, I would add a background color to the navigation. Also make the font a little bigger. I like small fonts and happen to hae 20/20 vision, but a lot of people don't and will 'x' out of your site due to the font. Also change the color of the block quote text, or change the background color.

For the 04 layout DEFINATELY up the line-height. I'm on Opera right now and it's kinda mushed together.

Other than that, very lovely layouts, you really have an eye for design! <3

[sanrook]

great work dude...

awesome







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